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PostSubject: Depressing Poetry   Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:29 pm

Post all your depressing poetry here, basically stuff I write ^_^

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:34 pm

Trapped in memories,
With nothing left, but these oh so precious memories,
You've said goodbye, goodbye to everyone,
And everyone's gone, except these memories.

Trapped in the depths of a dream-like world,
Surrounded by the wraithlike past of the departed,
Hoping, for the memories to transform into reality,
They are so seemingly tangible, as if it all is actually there.

The brutal attack of the sudden jerk back to reality,
Leaves you heartbroken, every time
You find yourself hoping to be sent back to your dream-world,
You are living in the past, dwelling upon memories.

Trapped in memories,
With nothing left, but these oh so precious memories,
You've said goodbye, goodbye to everyone,
And everyone's gone, except these memories.

The memories have captured your mind,
Captured your soul,
Your memories have gained control of you,
Yet, there is nothing you can do, other than dwell upon your memories.

Engulfed in the familiar warmth of your memories,
Entrapped in the warm reassurance,
A false sense of security, suddenly swept upon you,
Trapped in memories.

Trapped in memories,
With nothing left, but these oh so precious memories,
You've said goodbye, goodbye to everyone,
And everyone's gone, except these memories.

~I was depressed... deal wit it >.< (Kinda inspired by Magii... few other people too)

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:38 pm

Who Cares?

Who cares? Out of the millions of people in this world, who actually cares about me and you?
Some might reply that their family and friends do, but is that really true?
Amidst all these self-absorbed people, does anyone actually have time to care?
Out of their busy, busy lives, does anyone have a minute to spare?
Miracles are held in the most inconspicuous places, does anyone have the time to find them?
If anyone has the time to care, you can find them, shining as brightly as a gem.
Many people of a young age are capable of much more then others expect,
Although instead of someone to listen and care, all they receive is hurt and neglect.
No one cares enough to look past the lie plastered upon their faces, which can clearly show,
That they are suffering from within, almost ready to blow.
Have they realized that behind a perpetual smile, hides layers and layers of angst and sorrow?
Sorrow which makes them want to cry as if there is no tomorrow.
This is the future of the world, us children who want to cry their hearts out any chance they get,
They know that no one really cares; they know that they are not alone, as others they have met,
Who share the same sorrow, who know that nobody cares, the same neglect they all try to hide,
They know that nobody who matters actually cares; nobody will be there at their side.
Who does care? Does anyone who can make a change actually care?
I don’t believe it, and giving up hope does feel nice, because sometimes I feel like I am but a spare,
I am unneeded, unwanted, yet here for some reason I do not know,
Maybe someday I will feel cared for, and on my face when I smile it will not be a lie I show.
But for now I still wonder, who really cares about me and you?
Although some think they have people who care, is it really true?

~Yea um... depressing day?

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:54 pm

Speechless, I like them both, 2nd one the most
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:03 pm

I've got a love-hate thing going with ur poetry... -_-

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:10 am

Lol told you it was depressing, you didn't *have* to come read it :p

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:11 am

Yeah, you didnt have to read it if you dont like depressing poetry ;P If you like a different type, make one for that and I'll see if my poems can fit into the categories
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:17 am

Why is it so hard to love you, yet so hard to stop? You brought me joy and happiness at first, but now all you are giving me is agony. Why is loving you so difficult? You hurt me, you broke my heart, you shattered my dreams, you left me broken, yet why do I still love you? You made me trust you, and then you deceived my trust, yet why do I still trust you? You comforted me when I was upset, yet now when you are the one making me upset, why aren’t you here to comfort me? Why is loving you so hard? Why can’t I stop loving you? Have you forgotten of my existence? Have you forgotten everything we had together? You were the one who always wiped my tears, so why are you the cause of them to fall? Why is it so hard to love you, yet so hard to stop?

~Half Poem Half Story ish thing.... I blame Magii for the inspiration

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:18 am

The wind whispers to me,
Quiet as can be,
“How can you let this go on?”
“How much longer will you wait? Everything will be gone.”
The deadly whisper sends chill down my spine,
“What happened to you? Why does your life lack shine?”
The wind goes away, leaving an empty feeling inside me,
Why did you do this? Why couldn’t you all let me be?
Realization hits me, as I fall back and cry,
You all have killed me, I wish to die.
Why did you all enter my life?
I was fine where I was, why did you all enter my life’s strife?
I asked for a hand to hold, you all gladly gave me an entire arm,
Now the arm is gone, causing me much eternal harm.
Without the arm I have nothing to catch me when I fall,
I have nothing to support me, to help me back up, I feel oh so small.
Why did you all bother to help me, when you all abandoned me in the end?
You all hurt me so much; my heart is hurt in a way so that it is impossible to mend.
How I wish to forget all this sorrow,
I wish to find another heart which I can borrow.
To rid me of this pain and heart-ache,
Because all of this, it’s like a horrid mistake.
What can I do to bring all those feelings back?
All this is killing me, I feel as if my heart is going to crack.
I cannot think about this anymore, you all have killed me from the inside,
What you all see is a lie, what I feel on the inside isn’t what I show on the outside.
I wish you would all come back to me… I miss you
Yes I do, it is really true.
There is nothing to do but wait for you all,
One day you might come back, come back to support me when I fall.
This is what the wind whispers to me,
Quiet as can be.

~No comment

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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Fri Jul 04, 2008 2:51 am

Wow. D. you totally ownz this topic Razz. Not anymore.


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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:44 am

This is kinda poetry. idk.

You only know how much someone is worth
When you really have lost them,
Otherwise, you go on with life as if they are just one of your friends,
That you love a lot
And you couldn't like without,
But you dont know what it feels like to live without them.
You can keep sayin you cant live without em
But when you do loose them
It hits you hard
Right in the face.
And sometimes,
You can't replace them
And sometimes you can.
But mostly,
When you've lost them
You can not replace the relationship you once shared
You have to live day after day
Without them.
You can cry, you can say sorry
But once you've broken up with them
You will never replace the relationship you once had
You can try
But believe me, you'll just argue and break up
And the second time is always worse than the first
And you don't want to know what the 5th time feels like
You don't want to be in that position
But I'll tell you, it's dreadful
You then realize how stupid you've been
You then realize, all the things you could of done
But the worst part is
You know you can never replace the relationship you once shared
I keep saying you can never replace the relationship you once shared,
But that isn't true
You both can,
But it'll take time, lots of time, and hard work
And ignoring the bad things they say every now and then and knowing that they are remembering all of the bad moments at the same time.
It's hard replacing something you once had.
Especially when you've crushed them day after day
And cant help it. No


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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:06 am

Hows that for depressing? Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: Depressing Poetry   Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:17 am

When you have lost someone
Life is busier than before
Because you no longer have that person
And the world is no longer about you and them
It's about everyone else subtract you.
You feel like you're in the empty corner of a fun-filled page
A corner no one dares to look at
That corner people leave creased,
Damaged,
Ripped
And Torn.

... Not finished yet.
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